Please, rate my writing Mr. Kitos…
Some people think that being a humorous person is interesting. People sometimes need a sense of humor from their friends to relieve stress. However, I think being a serious person is more suitable for me. I completely disagree that a good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities. This essay will explore several reasons why I disagree with that statement.
First of all, being a serious person makes other people respect. If someone often laughs and always makes a joke every time, it makes other people think that he is not serious person. In the real world especially in the office people look your attitudes to judge what kind of people you are. If you often makes joke in your office, your boss will notice you as an unserious person. But, if you are a serious person, he will trust to give you responsibilities. For instance, if there is a problem comes out in your office then your boss will give you chance to solve that problem, it means your boss respect to you.
Secondly, being a serious person makes your family trust you, then makes you more confidence to build your family into a good family. To illustrate,as a leader of a family, I must make a good rule in order to guide my family being a happy and good one. The character that I have to build is being a serious person to face variety problems that may come to my family. If I am not serious person, my family will not trust and will find out another person. For example, if my son has a problem with his friend, he will ask me what he should do to solve his problem. As a good father, I will pay attention seriously and give him a win-win solution and make him trust with my suggestion.
All in all, being a humorous person sometimes needed. But, I do believe that being a serious person makes people more respect and trust you.
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Please, rate my writing Mr. Kitos…
Some people think that being a humorous person is interesting. People sometimes need a sense of humor from their friends to relieve stress. However, I think being a serious person is more suitable for me. I completely disagree that a good sense of humor is one of the most important OF human qualities. This essay will explore several reasons why I disagree with that statement.
First of all, being a serious person makes other people respect YOU. If someone often laughs and always makes a joke every time, it makes other people think that he is not A serious person. In the real world(,) especially in the office(,) people look AT your attitudes to judge what kind of PERSON you are. If you often makes joke in your office, your boss will notice you as a FRIVILOUS person. But, if you are a serious person, he will trust to give you responsibilities. For instance, if there is a problem comes out in your office then your boss MAY give you THE chance to solve that problem(.) It means your boss respect to you.
Secondly, being a serious person makes your family trust you(.) THIS makes you more confidenT IN buildING your family into a good family.
To illustrate, as a leader of a family, I must make a good rule in order to guide my family TO being a happy and good one. The character that I have to build is being a serious person to face A variety OF problems that may come to my family. If I am not A serious person, my family will not trust ME and will find out another person.
For example, if my son has a problem with his friend, he will ask me what he should do to solve his problem. As a good father, I will pay attention seriously and give him a win-win solution and make him trust with my suggestion.
All in all, being a humorous person IS sometimes needed. But, I do believe that being a serious person makes people HAVE more respect and trust you.
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Not bad GS, not bad at all.
Kitos. 7.5/10
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