How can I make these two sentences sound more natural?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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  1. In autumn we wear light clothes as we do in spring because the temperatures in both seasons are mild

  2. In autumn we wear light clothes as we do in spring as the temperatures in these two seasons are very similar to each other.

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In autumn we wear light clothes like in spring, because the temperatures are mild in both seasons.

In autumn we wear light clothes like in spring, because the temperatures in these two seasons are very similar.

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Here are some more possibilities.
“We wear light clothes in spring and autumn because of the mild temperatures[ in both seasons].”
“The mild temperatures of spring and autumn call for light clothing.”
“The mild weather in autumn calls for light clothing - just like spring.”

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I think they are natural as they are. However, another possibility is illustrated below.

With an almost similar season during autumn and spring, we wear light clothes.

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