His health had deteriorated after he suffered a stroke in 2010, said his daughter, Ms Anjanette Huan, 38.
Should it be “His health deteriorated” instead?
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His health had deteriorated after he suffered a stroke in 2010, said his daughter, Ms Anjanette Huan, 38.
Should it be “His health deteriorated” instead?
Thanks
The sentence is fine as it is.