Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Advertising influences people’s behavior in negative way.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Many hours of TV programs show advertisements that some company tell people about their product. They say their product is the best and you should buy it. These advertisement can change people manner in a bad way.
In advertising we see a young man or woman that encourage people to use their product, and try to convince people to spent money for this product. So it cause to increase the rat of consumption. Because of advertising people always waste their money and time. For example every day we see advertisement about using some product to have smooth, soft and bright skins or some kind of advertisement about use their instrument to be in good shape. When people see these advertisement, they persuade to use these stuff. They waste more money and time to have better look instead of using these money to created future for their children or spent time to teach them.
Also these advertisement always exaggerate about their product. It seems they try to deceive people to sell their product. Many people trust to these advertisement and buy them. But when they see real product, they become angry. In fact these advertisements abuse of honesty of people.
To sum up, I think advertising have negative effect on human behavior because they encourage people to consumption also they deceive them.
Hi Yazdani - I coach my son’s soccer team and the other coach’s name is Yazdian - almost the same! I thought your essay was pretty good. Your first reason was good, but your second seemed a bit weaker. Your writing was clear overall, but you had a lot of small errors in singular/plural matching and verb conjugation that make a lot of your writing sound unnatural. Overall, I would rate this a 3.5 out of 5.