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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

In modern life, children play a significant role in our lives. We not only take care of our children but also bring good living conditions to them. Some people think that it is better for their children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. However, I entirely believe that growth up in a big city is better for our children.

First in all, a big city provide a better education to children . There are many good teachers in schools in the big city. They not only teach children to study but also give good methods for children. Furthermore, a lot of good facilities help children to understand and master lessons. For example, in my primary school, I started to learn about computer, I usually went to the lab to use the computers. It not only helped me approach to one of the most important office soft ware – Microsoft Word office but also helped me practice to use it fluently. It is helpful to me till today.

Secondly, Living in a big city help children study objects which they like. For example, When my nephew was 10 years old, she wanted to study English. However, In her district, there were not any English center , so she don`t have other choice to travel to my city twice a week to learn English. Moreover, living in a big city bring good environment for children to prove their talent of other passion such as music , art.

Finally, A big city have a lot of entertainment centers for children. Children have many choices to relax after studing, they can go to theater or cinema to watch film as well as go to shops to play game . Furthermore, children and their family can go to restaurants to eat together at the weekend, it is wonderful time to warm up the relationship of their family by joking or telling humorous stories.

All in all, as these reasons stated above show, I entirely support that living in a big city is better for children to grow up because children can not only get extra knowledge but also study objects which they like . In addition, a big city have many leisule centers for children.

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