I wants to introduce all of you, I think all of you accepted me,
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Hi Mattew, welcome to the society of this forum. where are you from?
Welcome Matthew,
Hope you’ll feel good between us!
HELLO EVERY NEW FRIENDS,
I’M MANSHAH SHAIKH.I’M NEW MEMBER OF ESL COMMUNITY, I LIVED IN SHARJAH IN U.A.E .I’M STUDENT OF 8 GRADE .I WANT TO IMPROVE MY WRITTING SKILL.AS MY TEACHER COMPLAINS THAT I’M GOOD STUDENT ,BUT IN WRITTING I MAKE GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES .SO, I NEED SOME GUIDANCE ,TO IMPROVE MY THOSE MISTAKES.
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Hello Manshah and welcome to the forums.
First of all, it is more difficult to read sentences written entirely in capital letters than sentences written in lowercase with the appropriate capital letters. It is also important to get the capital letters correct in English, so please take off the ‘caps lock’ key and type using lowercase forms.
Your work is also difficult to read because you are making space errors when you type. There should be a space after every full stop and comma, but not before them, as you can see in my post.