Hi friends i am Harsh Chouhan,i am 20 and i am from India.
my english is good but i am not fluent at it, this is because i really do not have anyone around me to speak english to and that is why i would like you friends to help me improve my english i will be waiting for your reply…
cheerio, Harsh
When you say that your English is good, you are expected to write at least as follows:
Hi, friends! I am Harsh Chouhan, aged 20, and I am from India. My English is good but I am not fluent in it. It is because I really do not have anyone around me to speak (speak to) in English. So I would like you to help me improve my English. I am waiting for your response. Cheerio! Harsh.
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