Has the ease of cooking improved life?
Food is the core objective that drives all to work. Assistance of technological advancement makes the cooking much easier for the new generation. However, these food preservations have crucial drawbacks that I will describe in the rest of my essay.
Today, majority of employees prefer to get frozen food from the markets and cook their meal quickly. In fact, they are frustrated after hard work and just want to eat their meal and lay down for the rest. People think that food preservations ease their duty, help them to avoid time wasting and take away a great burden from their shoulders. Contrary, it is a short sighed idea. Food preservations contain no vitamins and have a little nutritional value. They cause weight gaining, week health that in turns leads to heart diseases and other problems. Of course, considering these disadvantages, traditional fresh foods with the high nutrients and vitamins stand above all.
Additionally, cooking is a way for family gathering. People often spend funny times during cooking and make the meaningful conversations. Also it helps them to show their creativity and enjoy with its results. Moreover, cooking is an essential tool to release stress and anxiety and pick up motivation and energy instead. Although, advanced technology in the cooking eases people life in some areas, however, it avoids people to enjoy with the cooking benefits.
All these illustrations point out that, we should not forget the huge advantages of fresh food and avoid using abundant amount of food preservations.
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Has the ease of cooking improved life?
Food is the core objective that drives all to work. Assistance of technological advancement makes the cooking much easier for the new generation. However, these food preservations have crucial drawbacks that I will describe in the rest of my essay.
Today, THE majority of employees prefer to get frozen food from the markets and cook their mealS quickly.
In fact, they are OFTEN frustrated after A hard DAYS work and just want to eat their meal and lay down for A rest. People think that food preservations ease their duty, help them to avoid time wasting and take away a great burden from their shoulders. Contrary, it is a short sighTed idea. Food preservations contain no vitamins and have little nutritional value. They cause weight gain AND LEAD TO POOR health AND THESE in turn lead to heart diseases and other problems.
Of course, considering these disadvantages, traditional fresh foods with the high nutrients and vitamins stand above all.
Additionally, cooking is a way for family GET-TOGETHERS. People often spend ENJOYABLE times during cooking and HAVE meaningful conversations. Also it helps them to show their creativity and enjoy THE results.
Moreover, cooking is an essential SKILL THAT releaseS stress and anxiety and INCREASES motivation and energy.
Although advanced technology in cooking eases people life in some areas, however, it PREVENTS people FROM ENJOYING the BENEFITS OF HOME cooking.
All these illustrations point out that we should not forget the huge advantages of fresh food, and avoid using abundant amountS of food preservatiVES.
Kitos. 7/10
thx my friend…what is the main reason for my weakness? does the essay contain fewer words or the topic illustrate many errors and confusion?
No, it merely indicates a shortage of vocabulary. Don’t panic, you will improve the more you write. You show the ability to be good. Give it time to develop.
Kitos.