@tim_m, thank you very much for taking the time to read and analyze our Chinese friend’s essay. How long did it take you to create this post and how much experience in writing and evaluating essays do you have? You must have done this type of work before so we should explore ways of putting your knowledge and skills to better use. For example, you could create some kind of guideline or tutorial on how to write essays effectively. I know that there is an entire essay writing services industry available fighting for customers by cutting prices and honing their marketing and sales machines. I don’t mean we should compete with those companies. Instead, we should point out to people like @11129 that she needs to think about her future instead of focusing on immediate results only. Here is an article she and all the other young people should read and digest:
Please let me know what you think.
Many thanks.