Hoadong
February 21, 2011, 2:01pm
1
Hello teachers,
Please correct the sentences below, if I’ve made any mistake. Thank you!
What would you do if you saw your neighbour’s house was burning? Would you try to save people inside?
I was born and grew up in a small province which is about 160 km far from Hanoi. The living condition there is not as good as Hanoi is.
He was accused of murder and was sentenced to death/ would be sentenced to death.
I will try to build a school for the orphans in my neighbourhood (in the future).
The rector promised to set up international relationships with regional universities/ the universities in region.
‘…if you saw that your neighbour’s house was burning’ or ‘if you saw your neighbour’s house was burning’the/any people inside.
… 160 km away from Hanoi. The living conditions there are not as good as they are in Hanoi.
The others are okay other than the fact that the second option in number 5 requires ‘the region.’
Hoadong
February 23, 2011, 2:05am
3
Beeesneees, thank you!
Let me write those sentences here again.
What would you do if you saw that your neighbour’s house was burning? Would you try to save the people inside?
I was born and grew up in a small province which is 160 km away from Hanoi. The living conditions there are not as good as they are in Hanoi. (I wonder if it is right to say: "The living condition there is not as good as it is in Hanoi.)
Hello Hoado,
‘Living condition’ is not correct - there will always be more than one.
Hoadong
February 23, 2011, 10:42am
5
Dear Beeesneees,