GMAT essay. Responsibility for adjusting to Job Obsolescen.

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your position with specific reasons and/or examples drawn from your reading, your observations, or your own experience.

Essay:

As technologies and changing in social need render more and more job obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjust? While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding new works, both industry and government have some obligation to provide the means of doing so.

Admittedly, I agree that individuals must assume primary responsibility for adjusting to job obsolescence, especially since our educational system has been preparing us for it. For decades, our schools have been counseling young people to expect and prepare for numerous major career changes during their lives. And concerned educators have recognized and responded to this eventually with a broader base of practical and theoretical coursework that affords students the flexibility to more from one career to another.

However, industry should bear some of the responsibility as well. It is industry; after all, that determines the particular directions, technological progress and subsequent social change will take. And since industry is mainly responsible for worker displacement, it has a duty to help displaced workers adjust—through such means as on-site training programs and stipends for further education.

Government should also assume some of the responsibility, since it is partly government money that fuels technological progress in industry. Moreover, government should help because it can help—for example, by ensuring that grants and federal insured student loans are available to those who must retool in order to find new works. Government can also help by observing and recording in worker displacement and in job opportunities, and by providing this information to individuals so that they can make prudent decisions about their own further education and job searches.

In conclusion, while individuals should be responsible for future job changes, both government and industry shoulder obligations to provide training programs, funding and information that will help displaced workers successfully retool and find new employment.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a professor and his student

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your position with specific reasons and/or examples drawn from your reading, your observations, or your own experience.

Essay:

As technologies and changES in social need render more and more job obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjust? While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding new work, both industry and government SHOULD have some obligation to provide the means of doing so.

Admittedly, I agree that individuals must assume primary responsibility for adjusting to job obsolescence, especially since our educational system has been preparing us for it. For decades, our schools have been counselLing young people to expect and prepare for numerous major career changes during their lives. And Concerned educators have recognized and responded to this eventually with a broader base of practical and theoretical coursework that affords students the flexibility to moVe from one career to another.

However, industry should bear some of the responsibility as well. It is industry after all, that determines the particular directions, technological progress and subsequent social change THAT IT will take. And Since industry is mainly responsible for worker displacement, it has a duty to help displaced workers adjust—through such means as on-site training programs and stipends for further education.

Government should also assume some of the responsibility, since it is partly government money that fuels technological progress in industry. Moreover, THE government should help because it can help—for example, by ensuring that grants and federal insured student loans are available to those who must retool in order to find new works. THE government can also help by observing and recording in worker displacement and in job opportunities, and by providing this information to individuals(,) so that they can make prudent decisions about their own further education and job searches.

In conclusion, while individuals should be responsible for future job changes, both government and industry SHOULD shoulder obligations to provide training programs, funding and information that will help displaced workers successfully retool and find new employment.
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Very well written Hanoi.

Kitos. 9/10