George Milton, from John Steinbecks Of Mice and Men is a vital character in the novel

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Of Mice and Men------George Milton
George Milton, from John Steinbecks Of Mice and Men is a vital character in the novel. He is accompanied by Lennie Small who is mentally disabled but physical strong men during the Great Depression. They travel together for reach the American dream of “having their own homestead”. George Milton is a quick-witted man who is Lennie’s guardian, best friend and protector. He represents a responsible common man who takes care of another common man that has disabled with living life and reaches their dream together.
To start with, Lennie always get into trouble because he likes to tend soft things and as a mentally disabled he couldn’t control himself. After then, George automatically became the mess cleaner. At the beginning of the book, they were rove in a strange brush because Lennie’s eccentricity just causes a bad thing and compel them to travel around and find a new job. George was complaining “I can live so much easier without you.” George said this frequently even though he will never leave Lennie because his responsibility and loyalty to friendship.
After the beginning, they find a ranch job near Soledad. And met an old men name Candy who decided subsidize their homestead dream. Everything seems getting better until Lennie had done another bad thing which leads them to the bottom of ravine and crush their dream completely. He killed the Curley’s wife by an accident. Curley is a young, pugnacious man who is boss’ son. Lennie had collision with Curley before. George knows Curley’s revenge will suffer Lennie to death. So he made his choice. He found Lennie in a place they arrange before. He consoled the frighten Lennie. He started to tell him about their dream "…We gonna get a little place…We will have a cow… And we’ll have maybe a pig an’ chickens, rabbits… " Underwent the great conflict inside George, he took out the gun and shoot right back of Lennie’s head while he was immersing his visual imagery. Lennie died immediately in happiness and painless.
George’s murder of Lennie is a renunciation of his own dream. Because Lennie is the only person he wants to achieve the dream together. Lost Lennie also lost his only hope. It’s an unwillingly decision to make. But he had to. He certainly doesn’t want Lennie to suffer at Curley’s hand. And he also doesn’t want Lennie to harm anybody. This is the best way for Lennie and everyone’s safety. He killed Lennie out of love.
In conclusion, George Milton is a responsible common man with a dream. His loyal friendship and responsibility with Lennie helps him to sustain his dream of a better future. But sadly, it ends with the death of Lennie.

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George Milton from John Steinbeck’s Of Mice and Men is an important character in this novel. He is accompanied by Lennie Small, a mentally handicapped but physically strong man during the Great Depression. They travel together to achieve the American dream of “owning their own home.” George Milton is a quick-witted man who is Lennie’s guardian, best friend and protector. He embodies a responsible common man who cares for another common man who is handicapped in life, and who makes their shared dream come true.
At the beginning, Lennie always gets into trouble because he likes to take care of soft things and cannot control himself as a mentally disabled person. As a result, George automatically became the cleaner. At the beginning of the book, they were living in a strange thicket because Lennie’s eccentricity only causes mischief and forces them to move around and find a new job. George complained, “I can live so much easier without you.” George said this often, although he would never leave Lennie because of his responsibility and loyalty to the friendship.
After the beginning, they find a job on a ranch near Soledad. And they meet an old man named Candy who decides to support their dream of owning a ranch. Everything seems to be getting better until Lennie commits another evil deed that takes them to the bottom of the canyon and completely destroys their dream. He killed Curley’s wife by accident. Curley is a young, feisty man, the boss’s son. Lennie had already had a run-in with Curley once. George knows that Curley’s revenge will drag Lennie to his death. So he made his choice. He found Lennie at a place they had arranged to meet earlier. He comforted the frightened Lennie. He began to tell him about their dream: “…We will get a little house… We will have a cow… And we may have a pig and chickens and rabbits…” The great conflict that was going on in George caused him to take out the gun and shoot Lennie in the head from behind while he was immersed in his visual images. Lennie died instantly, happily and painlessly.
George’s murder of Lennie is a renunciation of his own dream. For Lennie is the only person with whom he wants to realize the dream. With the loss of Lennie, he also loses his only hope. It is a decision he is reluctant to make. But he had to do it. He certainly doesn’t want Lennie to suffer at Curley’s hands. Nor does he want Lennie to hurt anyone. This is the best way for Lennie and for everyone’s safety. He killed Lennie out of love.
In conclusion, George Milton is a responsible simple man with a dream. His loyal friendship and responsibility towards Lennie help him to keep his dream of a better future. But unfortunately, it ends with the death of Lennie.