Firing my soul

Even if you hurt me firing my soul

Is it correct? How would you say this in poetic way? Like searing with hot iron.My dictionary says: wound one’s feeling

Your rejection of my advances inflames me even more.

Thanks, Kitosdad; but this is out of what I want to say.


…tearing at my heart?
…ripping my soul?

Hello Beeesneees, I will use one of them if I don’t find something with fire, burn etc…

What about “burning my soul” ?

Even if you hurt me, setting my soul aflame.