Firing my soul

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Even if you hurt me firing my soul

Is it correct? How would you say this in poetic way? Like searing with hot iron.My dictionary says: wound one’s feeling

2

Your rejection of my advances inflames me even more.

3

Thanks, Kitosdad; but this is out of what I want to say.

4

Anyone?

5

…tearing at my heart?
…ripping my soul?

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Hello Beeesneees, I will use one of them if I don’t find something with fire, burn etc…

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What about “burning my soul” ?

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Even if you hurt me, setting my soul aflame.