Expression: 'Further to our discussion regarding my medium of education...'

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Hi

Which one of the following sentences is more natural and correct? Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated! :smiley:

  • Further to our discussion regarding my medium of education being English, please receive a few evidences.

  • Further to our discussion regarding my medium of education as being English, please receive a few evidences.

Tom

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Hi Tom,

Your two sentences donā€™t quite click:

Perhaps I could rework this as:

Further to our discussion /when I explained that I was educated in English/ concerning my English education, I am pleased to offer the following evidence.

Note that evidence is usually non-countable.

A

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Many thanks, Alan.

I would like to inform you that the company had asked me to prove that the MEDIUM of my education was English. So, could you please tell me if ā€œEnglish educationā€ in your sentence gives the same meaning as ā€œmedium of educationā€?

Could you please also inform me whether the following sentence is grammatically wrong or just unnatural and odd?

Tom