Examination suggestion

Good morning, Kitosdad!

The day after tomorrow I will take my examination for the first time, can you give any suggestions based on the several essays I showed to you?

I realized that these complicated sentences I made were not effective and sometimes not accurate, should I try to keep them simple?

Thank you every much!

TOEFL listening discussions: What is the purpose of this conversation?

“I realized that these complicated sentences I made were not effective and sometimes not accurate, should I try to keep them simple?”

A bit like answering your own question isn’t it He Yuxiao?

Yes, I noticed that "Keep it simple … Keep it interesting. " Aha!

And I think it’s necessary for me to do a last practice tonight.