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No one can deny that there is enjoyment in both ages and this differs from one person to another.
For me, I agree with the author’s statement that young people are more enjoying in their life than older people.
İt is my firm belief for three reasons, and I will state these reasons in the subsequent paragraph.
First, the youngest people have a lot of free time to enjoy in their life to do what they went, because they do not have a family like a wife and children must be taken care of them and no work commitments should be done and no many tasks that are not of their responsibilities.
İn contrast, the older people almost do not have time to enjoy themselves because of the heavy respossbitites like waking up early to work,
taking care of their family, and so many duties they have to work on it preventing them from tasting the taste of life.
Second, the youngest people are in good health which enables them to make what they enjoy then like traveling to a distant place, sitting with their friends in the restaurant and nightclubs, and many other things that satisfy them. Nonetheless, the older people most of them, unfortunately, have illnesses that hinder them from traveling to have good vacations and a special diet and place that prevents them from eating and sitting with their friends and chronic diseases stopped them from making interesting adventures. For example, I have a good time when I travel with my friends to any country without any problems, while my father spent most of his time at the work and when he the day resty he fell stayed at the home because of his old age to take relive from his cramps from lone hour work.
Finally, the youngest people in this time use technology constantly to make their life easy and flexible to enjoy like chatting with their friends from the bad and having a good time with each other, playing video games, browsing the unlimited wide world internet that is full of fascinating thins. Nevertheless, older people often do not understand the internet world and do not with video games either that will give the users the pleasure and vitality.
İn light of the reasons I mentioned, I strongly agree that young people enjoy their life more than older ones because of the free time they have to do what they desire and the health that gives them activity and strength which allow them to make any movement without any fear and because of the good exploitation of technology which permit the world in their hands