Teens/youth should take their own decision or they should take advice from their elders?
Every one is imposed to situation of making decision most often in their lives.either teens should be liberal enough to make their own decisions or they should always seek advise of thier elders/parents is an issue that offers fervent debate .Majority of people in both age groups maintain the idea that teenagers/youth should always seek guidance with their elders/parents.I agree with this idea because of following justifications,
firstly,majority of teenagers and youth are incapable of making right decisions in stressful conditions and are more prone to face some serious failures that can have massive impact on them , personally and mentally.when they seek advice from their seniors or parents, they advice on the basis of their own experiences and they can better visualize and consider the foreseeable impact of decision from different aspect and can warn youth about foreseeable cautions or risks.
Secondly, Parents and elders are well wishers of the youth and they better under stand their capabilities in any particular situation , so they will never advise any thing that is impossible for them to cope with.Sharing ideas with elders and listening to them in optiistic way and calmly analysing their ideas or suggestions can open mind of the youth and they can realise their benefits in implicating those suggestions that are rewarded by their parents / elders.
Thirdly,our parents and seniors has already recognized different faces of world and they know the facts in black and white and they are wise enough to make decisions that will benefit young individuals in maximum way .Their advice for youth is not only blessing bestowed upon us by almighty God but is shelter against failures.
All thing considered in my opinion elders ,educators and parents have serious responsibility of guiding youth in sophisticated way and should be given chance to question so that they will not have paucity or hesitation to seek advice from their seniors.I think this way failures among youth will not only dramatically reduced, but at the same time they will take responsibility of making good decisions by themselves.
hi ketos pray for me as tomorrow is ma paper of IELTS .
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Teens/youth should take their own decision or they should take advice from their elders?
Every one is imposed to situation of making decision most often in their lives.either teens should be liberal enough to make their own decisions or they should always seek advise of thier elders/parents is an issue that offers fervent debate .Majority of people in both age groups maintain the idea that teenagers/youth should always seek guidance with their elders/parents.I agree with this idea because of following justifications,
firstly,majority of teenagers and youth are incapable of making right decisions in stressful conditions and are more prone to face some serious failures that can have massive impact on them , personally and mentally.when they seek advice from their seniors or parents, they advice on the basis of their own experiences and they can better visualize and consider the foreseeable impact of decision from different aspect and can warn youth about foreseeable cautions or risks.
Secondly, Parents and elders are well wishers of the youth and they better under stand their capabilities in any particular situation , so they will never advise any thing that is impossible for them to cope with.Sharing ideas with elders and listening to them in optiistic way and calmly analysing their ideas or suggestions can open mind of the youth and they can realise their benefits in implicating those suggestions that are rewarded by their parents / elders.
Thirdly,our parents and seniors has already recognized different faces of world and they know the facts in black and white and they are wise enough to make decisions that will benefit young individuals in maximum way .Their advice for youth is not only blessing bestowed upon us by almighty God but is shelter against failures.
All thing considered in my opinion elders ,educators and parents have serious responsibility of guiding youth in sophisticated way and should be given chance to question so that they will not have paucity or hesitation to seek advice from their seniors.I think this way failures among youth will not only dramatically reduced, but at the same time they will take responsibility of making good decisions by themselves.
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You are sadly lacking in the use of ARTICLES, plus you must recognise that each sentence always starts with a Capital Letter. Better brush up on these before tomorrow.
Good luck.
I think you are too good to be making such errors. I think you are winding me up Sam. On this written work I would give you 7/10, but I think you are more than capable of scoring 10/10.
Hi Sam,
I think your essay is strong but there are some grammar and punctuation errors still in there. When I am preparing for an essay at a new level I find it really useful to get a custom essay written on a similar topic. Then you can refer to it for advice and guidance on the sort of structure, essay format and language you should be aiming at.
I found this really useful in my studies to help me get a grasp of the sort of thing I should be trying to produce - it might help you too.
Hope this helps and loads of luck with the exams
Laura