Essay: Which would you buy Jwellery or tickets to concert?

You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Gift offered in the form of money has so many advantages. Most important is that it gives you the freedom to spend it as you wish. So if anytime I am offered certain amount
of money as gift I use it judiciously. Given a choice between jewellery and tickets to a concert I would love to attend a concert.

Firstly, I am more of a social and fun-loving person. So the idea of attending a concert is in itself so appealing. Me and my friends would have such a great time.
We just keep on thinking new places and events to attend. Concert are so enjoyable. Last time me and my friends got a chance to attend a rock concert. We danced and sang.
All of us enjoyed so much. It served as a stress buster. Music concerts always rock!

Secondly, in concerts I love the live in action concept. Its all happening right in front of you, their interaction with the crowd and seeing them in reality. The thrill and excitement enthralls me. This factor really drives me crazy. Also, the experience amdist a large crowd is one of its kind. People become so carried away together. Its just the performer and you.
One good concert I would like to mention is the Alladin Musical I had seen in Disneyland. The experience is beyong words. I found the performances so powerful and appealing that I can never forget them. The amalgam of music, drama, action, dialogues was very beautiful. Such concerts are bound to be treasured as best ones.

To conclude I would say, I have got taste of how it feels to attend a concert so I will never miss a chance to attend one whenever possible.


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TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Physics

A gift offered in the form of money has so many advantages. Most important is that it gives you the freedom to spend it as you wish. So if any-time I am offered A certain amount of money as gift I use it judiciously. Given a choice between jewellery and tickets to a concert I would love to attend a concert.

Firstly, I am more of a social and fun-loving person. So the idea of attending a concert is in itself so appealing. Me and My friends AND I would have such a great time.
We just keep on thinking OF new places and events to attend. ConcertS are so enjoyable. Last time me and my friends MY FRIENDS AND I /got/HAD/ a chance to attend a rock concert, we danced and sang.
/All of us/WE ALL enjoyed IT so much. It served as a stress buster. Music concerts always rock!

Secondly, in concerts I love the live in-action concept. It IS all happening right in front of you. Their interaction with the crowd, and seeing them in reality.
The thrill and excitement enthrals me. This factor really drives me crazy. Also, the experience AMIDST a large crowd is one of its kind. People become so carried away together. It IS just the performer and you.
One good concert I would like to mention is the Alladin Musical I had seen in Disneyland. The experience WAS beyonD words. I found the performances so powerful and appealing that I can never forget IT. The amalgam of music, drama, action, dialogues was very beautiful. Such concerts are bound to be treasured as THE best ones.

To conclude I would say, I have got A taste of how it feels to attend a concert so I will never miss a chance to attend one whenever possible.


Good work Goodman, with a nice use of vocabulary and examples. Your enthusiasm bubbled over and brought your composition to life.

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Thank you Kitos :slight_smile: