essay: well-paid job vs job you enjoy

Here is my essay I’m going to crash the TOEFL after 3 months :slight_smile:
Some people prefer job that pays well, while others prefer job they enjoy.

Nowadays it is very important for every human being to have a secure job and maintain high living standard. Some people prefer job, which pays well and benefit from the perks and other advantages that a particular job offers. Others prefer to work job they enjoy which is not as demanding as the high paid job and salaries are not so big.

To begin with, some people prefer to work a prestige job in which salaries are tremendous and ones can benefit from the advantages and the conditions that a particular job offers. This option allows employees to benefit form the perks of a particular company for example free lunch, company car or increments. Also, big companies offer sickness benefit as well as good pension contributions and secure job for their workers. Another positive feature is the good atmosphere and the healthy environment as well. But, this sort of job demands much skills and sometimes working on unsociable hours as well as the enormous stress. Also, conditions may look very well in a luxury office, but there is a sick building syndrome which is a very common future in business buildings and harms people’s health. A good illustration of this problem are the last statistics that show how dangerous is this phenomena.

On the contrary, some people prefer to work job they enjoy in which salaries are not so big, compared to the prestige jobs. But this point of view also, has many positive characteristics. The most important features are less working hours and the little amount of stress that occurs in low-paid jobs. Moreover, to enjoy your job has a significant meaning for the mental and physical health even though the increments are smaller. For instance, imagine that you work in a big business company twelve hours per day, and you don’t have time for your family or friends hence, you will become a workaholic.

All in all, it is better to work job you enjoy than a job that pays well, because your life will be more pleasurable and healthier.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on Modern World History

Here is my essay I’m going to crash the TOEFL after 3 months :slight_smile:
Some people prefer job that pays well, while others prefer job they enjoy.

Nowadays it is very important for every human being to have a secure job and maintain A high living standard. Some people prefer A job which pays well and WHERE THEY benefit from the perks and other advantages that a particular job offers. Others prefer to work AT A job they enjoy which is not as demanding as the highER paid job(.) and salaries are not so big.

To begin with, some people prefer to work ON a prestigeOUS job in which salaries are tremendous and one can benefit from the advantages AND the conditions that particular job offers. This option allows employees to benefit FROM the perks of a particular company(,) for example(,) free lunch, company car or increments. Also, big companies offer sickness benefit as well as good pension contributions and JOB SECURITY for their workers.
Another positive feature is the good atmosphere and the healthy environment as well. But, this sort of job demands MANY skills and sometimes THE working OF unsociable hours as well as the enormous stress.
Also, conditions may look very well in a luxury office, but there is a sick building syndrome which is a very common future in business buildings and harms people’s health.
A good illustration of this problem are the LATEST statistics that show how dangerous is this phenomena.

On the contrary, some people prefer to work AT A job they enjoy in which salaries are not so big compared to the prestigeOUS jobs.
But this point of view also, has many positive characteristics. The most important features are less working hours(,) and the LESSER amount of stress that occurs in low-paid jobs.
Moreover, enjoyING your job has a significant meaning for the mental and physical health even though the increments are smaller.
For instance, imagine that you work in a big business company twelve hours per day, and you don’t have time for your family or friends(,) hence you will become a workaholic.

All in all, it is better to work AT A job you enjoy than a job that pays well, because your life will be more pleasurable and healthier.
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