Essay: Traditional houses vs. Modern apartment buildings!

Hi, I found this topic interesting, I it makes me to write an essay about it.

Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Started: 1:10am, Finished: 1:50am

I would like to live in a traditional house rather than a modern apartment building because of following reasons:

First of all, I have risen up in a traditional house with my parents. It makes me feel comfortable to continue living in the same kind of house. After all, those house are cheap in price, and people around are almost acquainted and familiar. Most of my families live in small vicinity, so I would like to stay nearby, and stay in touch with them.

The second reason makes me to choose to live in a traditional house is that most of them have yards. I would like you build a small garden with flowers in the yard of my traditional house, which is almost impossible in apartment building yards. I can grow grapevines, apple trees, and so forth. I can talk with my nice neighbors while I am watering the green plants. I can always come out and lie down in the night, and watch the stars.

The third reason is that people around traditional houses are so nice and kind than those people who live in the cities. The people in the cities are always busy with their jobs, they are always tired, and more over they are always in rush. So, there is no time to know each other well.

Last but not the least, is that there is no need to be worry about making a little bit loud noises. I think in an apartment you are too restricted to do something noisy. In traditional houses, your neighbors may never knock your door and ask you to turn the TV down. But, if you live in an apartment, you need to be quiet, because one of your neighbors is tired and want to sleep early.

Taking all the above mentioned into account, I would like to live in a traditional house, because most of my family members are living in these kinds of houses. People around these houses are nice. You can raise plant in your small garden. Children could play games in the yard, and finally these houses are to convenience to do noise activities without bothering your neighbors.

Hi Kitos, How is painting your house going? Oh, more importantly, How are Rusty, Voilleta, and Becky? Are they fine? Do you still bring them out for walking while you are busy with your painting?

Kitos, I would like to ask your evaluate, score, and also write some comments for this essay. I know you are really busy these days.

Cheers.

-Salivan

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two university students who met on campus

Interesting point of view, interestingly we posted our essays at the same time. You like me are not sleeping. Go to the bedroom now. (devil) :stuck_out_tongue:

Hi, I found this topic interesting, I it makes me to write an essay about it.

Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Started: 1:10am, Finished: 1:50am

I would like to live in a traditional house rather than a modern apartment building because of following reasons: (Don’t repeat the theme of the topic.)

First of all, I have risen upHAVING BEEN RAISED in a traditional house with my parents, it makes me feel comfortable to continue living in the same kind of house.
After all, those houseS are cheap in price, and people around are USUALLY acquainted and familiar.
Most of my familY MEMBERS live WITHin A small DISTANCE OF ME, so I would like to stay nearby, and stay in touch with them.

The second reason WHY I WOULD PROBABLY choose to live in a traditional house, is that most of THESE HOUSES have yards.
I would like TO build a small garden with flowers in the yard of my traditional house, which is almost AN impossibILITY TO DO in THE YARD OF AN APARTMENT BUILDING.
I COULD grow grapevines, apple trees, and so forth.
I can talk with my nice neighbors while I am watering the green plants, AND I can always come out and lie down oON THE GRASS in the night, and watch the stars.

The third reason is that people WHO LIVE IN traditional houses are so nice and USUALLY MUCH kindER than those people who live in the cities. The people in the cities are always busy with their jobs, they are always tired, and (moreover) they are always in A rush, so there is LITTLE time to GET TO know each other BETTER.

Last but not the least, there is no need to be worrIED about making aN OCCASIONAL loud noise. I think in an apartment you are too restricted to do something noisy.
In traditional houses, your neighbors may never knock ON your door and ask you to turn the TV down. But, if you live in an apartment, you need to be quiet, because one of your neighbors COULD WELL BE tired and MAY want to sleep early.

Taking all the above mentioned into account, I would like to live in a traditional house, because most of my family members are living in these kinds of houses. People WHO LIVE IN these houses are nice. You can raise plantS in your small garden. Children could play games in the yard, and finally these houses are toO WELL CONSTRUCTED THAT THE OCCASIONAL noisY activities WOULD NOT BOTHER your neighbors.


A nice cheerful essay Salivan. I’m sure your neighbours would appreciate having you as their neighbour.

Kitos. 7.5/10

Many thanks Kitos to correct this essay. I really appreciate your efforts and helps.
I know your are really busy, but you are still helping up.

-Salivan

P.S.
Hi, Mladenqnev, How are you? It seems that you too have done it well.