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Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Acquiring knowledge in university is one of the most important steps to have student’s bright career prospect, therefore many assume that government funds should be spent on higher education for all students, regardless of socio-economic backgrounds. I agree with this point of view in some extent and this essay will explain why.
To begin with, I understand why many support to the idea that allocating national budget for higher education will bring significant advantages. In fact, students must pay exorbitant tuition fees to study in university, so it would be unfair if only students who come from the wealthy families can afford tertiary education fees. Although students come from different financial backgrounds, they are in equal in intelligence and scholastic capability. Therefore, by providing free higher education, all students will have equal opportunities to access tertiary-level education, which may contribute to stop brain drain. Nonetheless, since the government must tackle many pressing problems such as poverty, or juvenile crime, thus I would argue that it would be better for the government to cover partly university education’s fees for students
However, making investment national budget to pay all university attender’s cost may have detrimental effect on society. When all students are able to earn bachelor degree, the value of these degrees may decrease, which lead to the rise of proportion of graduates who are employed based on their qualifications. Furthermore, dedicating money for higher education will cost the government the great deal of money, hence, the nation have to impose higher taxes on their citizens to ensure enough money for education; as a result, this will increase the financial burden on them.
In conclusion, while I agree that all students have the right to pursue the higher education due to their desire to increase their income later, I think that the government are no under obligation to take care of all university education’s fees.