Hello,
Here is my essay about death penalty. I would greatful if you reviewed it.
Death penalty
The death penalty or capital penalty is a punishment of capital crime and offences.
Many people believe that death penalty has a lot of costs, and it more expensive than living in the prison, it is not a deterrent and can’t help society to prevent from occurring crimes and they try to band it. The protesters think the victim is already dead and we can’t bring them back.
Thrift in costs isn’t the aim of death penalty and it is not for avoiding from crimes, I think it is just the only verdict which serves justice about a murder, although the victim wouldn’t be brought back.
Just one situation makes me worry, what if one innocent wrongly executed? Sure, we can’t make up for it. Judges must be cautious of the evidences they have which prove someone’s guilt, before announcing death penalty.
I disagree with abolish the idea of death penalty. It doesn’t violate human rights. Many people dread death penalty so they don’t want be a murder or do some crimes like the one’s related to illegal drugs.
To improve safety and security in the society we need to figure out other solutions. Our children have to be raised well; they must be able to understand which makes them an offender. We need to patrol our bounders. The police officers should be nimble and clever.
However we can’t stand somebody death, It doesn’t mean we eliminate death penalty. It is essential to persist for everyone’s relief but just based on the special criteria.
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Hello,
Here is my essay about death penalty. I would greatful if you reviewed it.
Death penalty
The death penalty or capital penalty is a punishment IMPOSED ON THE PERPETRATORS OF capital crimeS and offences.
Many people believe that THE death penalty has a lot of costs, and it more expensive than KEEPING THE PERSON ALIVE in prison(.) It is not a deterrent and can’t help society IN THE preventION OF REccurring crimes and they try to BAN it. The protesters think the victim is already dead and we can’t bring them back.
Thrift in costs isn’t the aim of THE death penalty(.) and it is not for avoiding from crimes, I think it is the only JUST verdict which serves justice AFTER a murder, although the victim wouldn’t be brought back.
Just one situation makes me worry, what if one innocent PERSON IS wrongly executed? Sure, we can’t make up for it. Judges must be cautious of the evidences they have which prove someone’s guilt, before announcing THE death penalty.
I disagree with abolishING the idea of death penalty. It doesn’t violate human rights. Many people dread THE death penalty so they don’t want be a murderER or do some crimes like the one’s related to illegal drugs.
To improve safety and security in OUR society we need to figure out other solutions. Our children have to be raised well; they must be able to understand THAT which makes them an offender. We need to patrol our bounderIEs. The police officers should be nimble and clever.
However we can’t stand somebody’S death, It doesn’t mean we eliminate THE death penalty. It is essential to persist for everyone’s relief(,) but just based on the special criteria.
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Only fair Porandokht. You need to do more reading.
Kitos. 7/10
Thank you dear Kitosdad
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