Doing same things vs. trying new things.

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Doing same things vs. trying new things.
Some people may hold opinion that trying new things isn’t favorable; since it can has some unexpected side effects. Others may disagree with this statement, because new actions are more exciting and experienceable. From my point of view, trying unfamiliarity is always beneficial and appealing. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my opinion.
First of all, people need to adapt to this rapidly developing and improving society, therefore they need to progress by trying new things. However, doing same old things isn’t favorable as long as they delay the advance of people. From my own experience, I was writing essays with same mistakes and unique style belonging to me; however I started to read books and others’ essays to improve my writing and acquire new ways. Frankly speaking, I didn’t progressing with the first way; conversely I have made an important advance within short time by changing my habits. In short, mankind necessitates development, which can be found by trying new things.
Secondly, besides requirements in life, such as improving, people also need some entertainment in order to make life more amusing. Doing same things is not proper action to achieve such a life; on the other hand, trying new things are appropriate for such a purpose, since it is more exciting and fascinating. As a matter of fact, people tend to be less excited and enlivened with predictable actions, for instance, it would be very dull and boring to play football against same opponents each time. In other words, life requires various changes during its different phases, in order to make world more enjoyable place.
However, I cannot deny the possible troubles while trying new things. There can be some side effects. For example, when I first time played American football I has broke my leg. However, I still support my opinion, since I can gain enough experience to be more prudent for future actions.
In a nutshell, new events help people to progress and enjoy in life, however doing same old things can’t provide any entertainment and advance. I am seeking for adventure, therefore I strongly prefer novels.
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Hello Kitos … i hope it will be good, because i was very disappointed on my last essay … i tried to write better one . thanks

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Some people may hold the opinion that trying new things isn’t favorable; since it can have some unexpected side effects. Others may disagree with this statement, because new actions are more exciting and experience-able. From my point of view, trying something unfamiliar is always beneficial and appealing. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my opinion.

First of all, people need to adapt to this rapidly developing and improving society, therefore they need to progress by trying new things. However, doing the same old things isn’t favorable as long as they delay the advance of people. From my own experience, I was writing essays with the same mistakes and unique style belonging to me; however I started to read books and others’ essays to improve my writing and acquire new ways. Frankly speaking, I didn’t progress with the first way; conversely I have made an important advance within short time by changing my habits. In short, mankind necessitates development, which can be found by trying new things.
Secondly, besides the requirements in life, such as improving, people also need some entertainment in order to make life more amusing. Doing the same things is not a proper action to achieve such a life; on the other hand, trying new things is appropriate for such a purpose, since it is more exciting and fascinating. As a matter of fact, people tend to be less excited and enlivened with predictable actions. For instance, it would be very dull and boring to play football against the same opponents each time. In other words, life requires various changes during its different phases, in order to make the world a more enjoyable place.
However, I cannot deny the possible troubles that might arise while trying new things. There can be some negative effects. For example, the first time played American football I broke my leg. However, I still support my opinion, since I can gain enough experience to be more prudent for future actions.

In a nutshell, new events help people to progress and enjoy life, however doing thesame old things can’t provide any entertainment and advance. I am seeking for adventure, therefore I strongly prefer novels.
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It was better than the last one. Please study the changes carefully.

Kitos. 8/10

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thanks kitos… i will … i will post them here … from now …

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Some people may hold THE opinion that trying new things isn’t favorable; since it can have some unexpected side effects. Others may disagree with this statement, because new actions are more exciting and experience-ABLE. From my point of view, trying SOMETHING UNFAMILIAR is always beneficial and appealing. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my opinion.
First of all, people need to adapt to this rapidly developing and improving society, therefore they need to progress by trying new things. However, doing THE same old things isn’t favorable as long as they delay the advance of people. From my own experience, I was writing essays with THE same mistakes and unique style belonging to me; however I started to read books and others’ essays to improve my writing and acquire new ways. Frankly speaking, I didn’t PROGRESS with the first way; conversely I have made an important advance within short time by changing my habits. In short, mankind necessitates development, which can be found by trying new things.
Secondly, besides THE requirements in life, such as improving, people also need some entertainment in order to make life more amusing. Doing THE same things is not A proper action to achieve such a life; on the other hand, trying new things is appropriate for such a purpose, since it is more exciting and fascinating. As a matter of fact, people tend to be less excited and enlivened with predictable actions.* For instance, it would be very dull and boring to play football against THE same opponents each time. In other words, life requires various changes during its different phases, in order to make THE world A more enjoyable place.
However, I cannot deny the possible troubles THAT MIGHT ARISE while trying new things. There can be some NEGATIVE effects. For example, * the first time played American football I BROKE my leg. However, I still support my opinion, since I can gain enough experience to be more prudent for future actions.
In a nutshell, new events help people to progress and enjoy * life, however doing thesame old things can’t provide any entertainment and advance. I am seeking for adventure, therefore I strongly prefer novels.
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I see i have some problems with THE and A :frowning: … i will try not to make them in the following essay … thanks