Doing new things.

Topic: Some people only like to do things they are good at. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?
Different people have different lifestyles. While many like doing regular things, others believe it is boring. Personally, I am eager to discover strange things, take risks, and also find out how I can be an expert in certain activities. In my view, I posit that trying new things is not only exciting, but it also helps me learn about them, and improve my potential skills.
Let’s begin with excitement. Although doing unfamiliar things can bring me risks, I am curious and crazy about it. When I was 15, I climbed Mount Kem, one of the highest mountains in my hometown. It was actually difficult and risky for me due to I was alone; however, this was the first time I had been excited like that. Admittedly, new and strange things usually compel me to try as much as possible.
In addition, I also can learn about unknown things. Climbing the mountain, I saw many different species. For instance: lichens, mushrooms, squirrels, rabbits, and birds. Putting y knowledge gained from school into this situation, I understood the symbiosis between mosses and algae b observing lichens with their splashes. Moreover, while I went to a dark cave, I found out some helices, one kind of animals which live in shadow areas. Consequently, I killed toe birds with one stone by remembering my biology lessons and understanding them in real life.
Moreover, by trying completely new things, T can discover my potential skills and put them into my daily life. After climbing the mountain, I realized that I could recognize all of trees and animals in real life which I had learned in books. I also remember them rapidly. Thanks to this, I discovered myself about my ability to memorize what I learned quickly. If I had not climbed the mountain, I would not have found out this ability.
It is so boring if I do not attempt to do what are unfamiliar with me. I cannot accept myself to repeat everything every day. As far as I am concerned, I admit that nothing and no one can prevent me from endeavoring to detect unacquainted and unknown things. This action is not only really stimulating but also convenient.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and his counselor

Topic: Some people only like to do things they are good at. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?
Different people have different lifestyles. While many like doing regular things, others believe it is boring. Personally, I am eager to discover strange things, take risks, and also find out how I can beCOME an expert in certain activities. In my view, I posit that trying new things is not only exciting, but it also helps me learn about them, and improve my potential skills.
Let’s begin with excitement. Although doing unfamiliar things can bring me risks, I am curious and crazy about it. When I was 15, I climbed Mount Kem, one of the highest mountains in my home-town. It was actually difficult and risky for me due to THE FACT THAT I was alone; however, this was the first time I had been excited like that. Admittedly, new and strange things usually compel me to try as much as possible.
In addition, I also can learn about unknown things. Climbing the mountain, I saw many different species. For instance: lichens, mushrooms, squirrels, rabbits, and birds. Putting My knowledge gained from school into this situation, I understood the symbiosis between mosses and algae bY observing lichens with their splashes. Moreover, while I went INto a dark cave, I found out some helices, one kind of animals which live in shadowED areas. Consequently, I killed TWO birds with one stone by remembering my biology lessons and understanding them in real life.
Moreover, by trying completely new things, I can discover my potential skills and put them into USE IN my daily life. After climbing the mountain, I realized that I could recognize all of THE trees and animals in real life which I had learned in books. I also remember them CLEARLY. Thanks to this, I discovered myself about my ability to memorize what I HAD learned quickly. If I had not climbed the mountain, I would not have found out ABOUT this ability.
It is so boring if I do not attempt to do THINGS THAT are unfamiliar TO me. I cannot BRING myself to repeat everything every day. As far as I am concerned, I admit that nothing and no one can prevent me from endeavoUring to detect unacquainted and unknown things. This action is not only really stimulating, but also very interesting.
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Not bad at all Duonghuyen.

Kitos. 8/10