DOCTOR HONORIS CAUSA

[Aero_B]

Hello my friends,

could a native speaker proofread the following text? Thanks a lot.

Waawe

The University XY

confers

Prof. Mike Brown

born on February 23rd, 1940

the honored title

DOCTOR HONORIS CAUSA
in the field of fine Arts

for achievements in the development of fine art and graphic design at an international scale.

The proposal submitted by the Dean of the Faculty of Art and Design was discussed and approved by the Scientific Council *of the Jan Evangelista Purkyně University in _______________ on March 23rd, 2000.

TOEFL listening lectures: What does the professor say about utopian socialists?

[Luschen]

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@Aero B

Hello my friends,

could a native speaker proofread the following text? Thanks a lot.

Waawe {what is this?}

The University XY

confers [upon]

Prof. Mike Brown

born on February 23rd, 1940

the honored title

DOCTOR HONORIS CAUSA
in the field of fine Arts [Fine Arts]

for achievements in the development of fine art and graphic design at[on] an international scale.

The proposal submitted by the Dean of the Faculty of Art and Design was discussed and approved by the Scientific Council *of the Jan Evangelista Purkyně University in _______________{is this where the name of a city goes?} on March 23rd, 2000.

TOEFL listening lectures: What does the professor say about utopian socialists?