Do you prefer to spend most of your time alone, or with your friends?

English as a Second Language Preparation for and help with the TOEFL® Test and
1

Topic: Do you prefer to spend most of your time alone, or with your friends?

Each of us has an own way of spending time; some people really like spending their time hanging out with friends, while some prefer to stay alone. For me, it is better to spend time staying alone. In this world where communication is daily and people including me have to rush to work, I like to have some time alone to relax and energize myself.

First of all, working with friends and people at school everyday sometimes makes me tired, so I need time alone to relax. Staying alone, I can listen to my favorite music and do my other favorite things without being disturbed by others and listening to their opinions. People’s opinions make me consider and make my brain work hard, which is sometimes tiring. Staying alone, I can think of everything in a free way without any restriction or influence.

Furthermore, being alone not only relaxes my brain after hours of working but also energizes it, making it work more efficiently latter. It is true that there is a limit on workload that the brain can handle; working over the limit will only damage our brains, and make them work inefficiently. Relaxing is a process of reorganizing the brain’s function and ability, thus makes it work better latter.

Finally, sometimes in working, I also prefer to work alone, as I am not disturbed by other people’s noise and their opinions. Working alone, I can completely concentrate on the work, and increase my ability to work independently. As a matter of problem, while working with people, although I can receive many useful helps, I am often distracted and become unable to work correctly. For instance, in math, working in group, I often do incorrectly some simple mathematics.

For all the reasons above, although communication and working with friends are important in the daily work, I prefer to spend my time alone. Being alone is really relaxing, makes my brain energized and work more effectively latter.

Thanks in advance, Kitos. I did review my last work.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and a university service representative

2

Kitos, I had reviewed the last work before posting this essay. So, I hope you can check this essay.
Thanks in advance.

3

Topic: Do you prefer to spend most of your time alone, or with your friends?

Each of us has our own way of spending time; some people really like spending their time hanging out with friends, while some prefer to stay alone. For me, it is better to spend my time alone. In this world where communication isconstant and people, including myself, have to rush to work, I like to have some time alone to relax and re-energize myself.

First of all, working with friends and people at school everyday sometimes makes me tired, so I need time alone to relax. Staying alone, I can listen to my favorite music and do my other favorite things without being disturbed by others. I work hard, which I sometimes find very tiring. Staying alone, I can think of everything in a free way without any restriction or influence.

Furthermore, being alone not only relaxes my brain after hours of working, but also energizes it, making it work more efficiently later. It is true that there is a limit on the workload that the brain can handle; working over the limit will only damage our brains, and make them work inefficiently. Relaxing is a process of reorganizing the brain’s function and ability, thus making it able to work better later.

Finally, sometimes in working, I prefer to work alone, so that I am not disturbed by other people’s noise and their opinions. Working alone, I can concentrate completely on the work, and increase my ability to work independently. As a matter of fact, while working with people, although I can receive a lot of useful help, I am often distracted, and become unable to work correctly. For instance, in maths, working in a group, I often do some simple mathematics incorrectly .

For all the reasons above, although communication and working with friends are important in the daily work, I prefer to spend my time alone. Being alone is really relaxing, makes my brain energized and able to work more effectively later.
…
Your attention to reviewing has certainly led to a noticeable improvement in your work.

Kitos. 8.5/10