dear mr kitos

I’m so disappointed because of my boring writing. Can you give me some advice to make my essay more interest? For me it’s so difficult. Another word, I have boring think.

TOEFL listening discussions: How long should the student’s essays be?

Kaka, it doesn’t matter. Just sit down and write about the things you see around you.
The little children in the school yard, the young mother with her baby, the old couple shopping in the supermarket. What are they saying or thinking?
The thing is, to open your imagination and just let the words come out. Give it a try!

Thank you for your advice