Could you please review my message and amend it?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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I am really gratefule to the moderators for reviwing the my posts and giving me a good direction.
I am working in this industry for 4 years. I love narure crafts music and computer. I love watching TV too. I can spend long hours in front of tv but it should be comedy programs.
Yesterday I was watching one program in pogo. It was really worth to watch and good to laugh.

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I am really greatful to the moderators for reviewing my posts and giving me good advice.

I have been working in this industry for 4 years. I love nature, crafts, music, and computers. I love watching TV too. I can spend long hours in front of the TV, but it must be comedy programs.

Yesterday, I was watching one program in pogo (???). It was really worth watching and was very funny.
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Hi MM,

Greatful ???

Alan

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Even gurus get tired, Alan-- thank you for keeping a watchful eye.

That’s grateful, improve!

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Sorry for taking the bloom off the rose but,

How the word improve has been used in the context given above? As a verb?

Tom

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Oops, got it!

Sorry! :oops: :oops:

Tom

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Hence the importance of spelling proper nouns with a capital letter (gosh, if this doesn’t sound patronising)!

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“improve” is my id :slight_smile:

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Hi again, Improve. I guess you have been improving your English even further since your last post here on the forum? What industry have you have been working for 4 years (will be soon 4.5 years…)?[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, question-response: Do you know when our new computers will arrive?[YSaerTTEW443543]