How did the airplane change people’s lives?
As an important invention of the humankind, planes are playing an important role in the life of the people. One of the main transport vehicle, planes are connecting the people, make the people smile during their in the airports, making the destinations closer and etc.
Plane is the fastest passenger vehicle in the world. This will help people to fly from one destination to other more comfortable and quick. Planes are playing a critical role in the life of the people. If you need to go somewhere as soon as possible, and suddenly you miss the plane. It means this is the only way to go to your destination faster and in time.
Airplanes are connecting cultures also. When you are on board you meet many people from different cultures and different nations.
In short, airplane affected the lives of the people from two points of view: time and travel.
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