Could you check this letter, please?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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I think there is something strange with some parts of this such as “thanks for addressing…”, “I can still decide…”, “Please keep me posted…”

So could you tell me if there is something that doesnt sound natural on it? :smiley:

Thanks.

Miss Gina:

Thanks for addressing me my questions. I think I wont have any problem with those conditions. However, I can still decide this when I am in Hattiesburg, can’t I?

I already sent you my toefl scores. And my high school scores should be sent by the next week. Please keep me posted when you get them.

Sincerely.

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Dear Gina / Dear Ms Smith,

Thanks for addressing my questions. I don’t think I will have any problems with those conditions. However, I can still decide this when I am in Hattiesburg, can’t I?

I already sent you my TOEFL scores, and my high school scores should be sent by next week. Please let me know when you get them.

Sincerely.