Could you check out my formal mail?

[Nevermind]

In the beginning I’d like to tell you I’m only 15, but if I want to study abroad I have to decide now. (I know I need to improve my English).

So here is the mail:

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to enquire about the requirements that Polish people need to have fulfilled after graduating their High School and wanting to get into a Sweden University. As well as I know I am not required to pay if I am citizen of county of European Union, Am I?

I would be grateful if you could send me further information about the situation of foreign students in Sweden.

I am looking forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
…

Thank you (;

[Mister_Micawber]

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to enquire about the requirements for a Polish high school graduate applying to a Swedish university. Is tuition waived for citizens of EU countries? I would be grateful if you could send me further information about the status of foreign students in Sweden.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,