Could you check my writing please Thanks a lot

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Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing with reference to your advertisement In Daily Mirror dated 26 of January.
I think my skills and experience make a great fit for the Position Of Juniour Manager.
I am a 20 year old student at the Local sport College and studying to become a football coach.
I also have some management skills. I was in charge of promotional sports projects aimed at increasing teenagers and adults’ in participation in sport.
I as well handled a budget of 2500 dollars USA and I supervised a team of part time staff.
I also have some prior experience as a football referee.
I am a hard-working and diligent students with excellent reference from my professors. I was given the title The Best students after I earned top marks during my first semester at college.
I would like to have an opportunity to have an interview.
I can start job after February 1 st.
Yours sincerely,
Ann Browm

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Dear Sir,
I am writing with reference to your advertisement in the Daily Mirror, dated 26 of January.
I think my skills and experience would make a great fit for the position of Junior Manager. I am a 20 year old student at the local sports college and I am studying to become a football coach. I also have some management skills. I was in charge of promotional sports projects aimed at increasing teenagers’ and adults’ participation in sport. I supervised a team of part time staff and I also handled a budget of 2500 USA Dollars. In addition, I have some prior experience as a football referee.
I am a hard-working and diligent student with excellent references from my professors. I was given the title ‘The Best Student’ when I earned top marks during my first semester at college.
I would like to have the opportunity to be given an interview for the advertised post. If successful, I could start work any time after February 1st.
Yours faithfully,
Ann Brown

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Many thanks for helping