It’s my new style writing. CAn you grade it for me please, mr kitos? and also my happy to receive any comment from any reader in this forum, especially, Mohamed and leenda- a king and queen of this forum :))
The world nowadays is the combination of tradition and modern. Some people prefer to live in an old house that help them be reminiscent of an unforgettable past enclosed a childhood memory. But in my opinion, as a new generation of youth, I prefer to live modern house.
Firstly, modern house is enormous that provides individual’s freedom. My house is a clear-cut example. It has three floor so each of member family has a distinct room. In that way, I can decorate my room base on my predilection that don’t fear to be
criticized by my family’s style. So it offers to me various option to choose location of my furniture such as my computer, my bed,… Moreover, Some picture of football stars and poster of film exaggerate the beauty of my room. My own world, don’t you think? Now I can release myself from rigid and boring principles to show my personality. In contrary, traditional house is so stuffy that contains 4-5 people. Dirty, noise, disturbance will decrease my quality of living. Obviously, living in modern house is very convenient.
Secondly, living in modern house benefit my health. In free-time, I can stand in house terrace and observe the minification of my eyes to the whole city. Ha Noi- a capital of Viet Nam is so lovely. A peaceful including a little bit of bustling creates the
majestical beauty of my city. Each time I have a sadness, I observe again this beauty that vibrate my emotion. So it helps me to remove stress that is formed because of the social responsibility and the strong pressure of education. Gradually, a terrace of my modern house is also my own world.
As I discuss above, I can strongly believe it’s better for me to live in modern house
TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a dorm mother and a resident