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Mr. Welly Eugene
Delmas 75, Impasse Ambroise #14
Port-Au-Prince, Haiti
Phone:

October 15, 2008

To: American Consulate General, Haiti

Tabarre 41
Route de Tabarre
Port-au-Prince, Haiti

Sub: Issuance of visitor’s visa to Preach

Dear Consulate,

Greeting to you in the name of Almighty God, our Creator!

Every year our church celebrate thanksgiving as one of the most important celebration that magnify God’s blessing and opportunity for all in a weekly revival fashion in Brooklyn, NY from November 23 to November 30 2008. For this reason, the church of God (Holiness) committee in Brooklyn, NY has elected Mr. Welly Eugene to be our evangelist and the main speaker during this glorious manifestation revival week.

Therefore, it is with great humility to request to you, if you could Rev. Welly Eugene a visitor visa to come in the United States for the week of November 23 to November 30 2008. If Mr. Eugene allowed to come in the United States, It will be a grace unto you! And it shall never be forgotten.

At the same time, we, the committee of Church of God (Holiness) will bear all responsibilities of Mr. Petit during his stay in United States.

Please feel free to contact us at the addressee if you need more information concerning this matter.

Rev. Enock Lors, Rev. Jean-Pierre Lors
Senior Pastor Associate Pastor

Yours Sincerely, Sincerely Yours

Hello Priscille,

Welcome to English-test.net. I’ve made some corrections in your letter above.

I hope there’s still time for you to get a visa for Mr. Eugene. Often these things can take a long time to happen, and less than two months isn’t much time for a visa application. Best of luck.