Hi everyone, can anyone correct what gramatical mistakes i have done in the following essay. Thanks in advance
[b]Identity is a distinctive characteristic and mental image that belongs to any individuals. What we believe and how we think about our selves will determine our success and failure in all aspects of life. Our identity can be either positive or negative. A positive identity means you have a strong self-belief in performing whatever challenge you face and you believe that you have sufficient knowledge, talent and potential necessary for success. A negative identity can do exactly the opposite. It can destroy our motivation and ability to achieve desire goals in life.
Having a negative self-conception can be very dangerous and it leads to fatal. For example, for many years I defined myself as an extremely terrible English language learner. I quit summer English language course twice in my country. I failed to speak English while I had been living in the UK for almost two years.
To achieve my dreams, I knew I had to change my belief. Fortunately, I found some useful language websites a while ago that helped me to redefine my identity and find a better method to learn language.