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Education is a lifelong task, do you agree or disagree?
Education is a duty that people have been doing it for centuries, and by that ,people cause many change in the world. Education is our responsibility in front of the world. I think it is an important lifelong task.
We should educate all of our life because we need to learn new technology and science. We face daily developing and if we want to use new technology in our life we have to learn how they work. In addition, new technologies are extended very soon in our common life. For example, using of internet have been spreading in our life for 10 years, but these days because of its extend if you do not know how to use it ,you are like an unread person. Whereas, many of our social work depend on internet we should learn it, for instant, today we have not to go to the bank for paying our bill or something like that. We stay at home or do our work and at our desk we pay it throw the internet. In fact, it causes our life easier and save our time in machines life.
Furthermore, the field of science and technology are much extended, so we want to be professional in one field we should choose one field and study for long time, perhaps to be expert on it some time we need time more than our life time. Whatever we know, we face more questions and to find those replies we should educate more and it continues. Meanwhile, the nature of life leads us to learn more and more. when we are child we need learn new things to be able to continues our life, we should learn how to walk, eat, defend and so on and when we grow up we learn things to improve our life, then as we can seen, all the time we need education.
Finally, if human believed limit time for education, we were at least in 5 centuries ago. Mean, if scientist in the past stopped their work and study, after for example 30 years, we need more times to arrive in our today situation. Fortunately, they did not stop their education and search, and then we are in good position now.
To sum up, education is a long life responsibility for all of us, as a result we should continue our education till we can use new technology and help to grow up science in our time.

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Education is a duty that people have been doing it for centuries, and by that ,people cause many change in the world. Education is our responsibility in front of the world. I think it is an important lifelong task.

We should educate all of our life because we need to learn new technology and science. We face daily developing and if we want to use new technology in our life we have to learn how they work. In addition, new technologies are extended very soon in our common life. For example, using of internet have been spreading in our life for 10 years, but these days because of its extend if you do not know how to use it ,you are like an ILLETRATE person. Whereas, many of our social work dependS UPon internet we should learn it, for instanCE, today we CAN PAY BILLS ONLINE have not to go to the bank for paying our bill or something like that. We stay at home or do our work and at our desk we pay it thrOUGH the internet. In fact, it causes MAKES our life easier and save our time in machines life.

Furthermore, the field of science and technology are much extended, so IF we want to be professional in one field we should choose one field and study for A long time, perhaps to be AN expert In it. , sometimeS we need TO SPEND time more than our life time. Whatever we know, we face more questions and to find those ANSWERS replies we should ATTAIN MORE educatION more and it continues. Meanwhile, the nature of life leads us to learn more and more. when we are child we need learn new things to be able to continues our life, we should learn how to walk, eat, defend and so on and when we grow up we learn things to improve our life, then as we can seen, all the time we need education.

Finally, if human believed limit time for education, we were at least in 5 centuries ago. MeanING, if scientist in the past HAD stopped their work and study, after for example 30 years, we need more times to arrive in our today situation. Fortunately, they did not stop their education and search, and BECAUSE OF THAT then we are in good position now.

To sum up, education is a long life responsibility for all of us, as a result we should continue our education till we can use new technology and help to grow up science in our time.


You really need to work on Grammer, Sentence Structure, Reading, Listening, Using Dictionary. 5/10