Can you give me your feedback on my text about international travel? It should be C1 level

Well, if you really want to discuss international travel you should have mentioned the issues that matter such as the fact that mass tourism has been contributing to global warming which in turn has displaced millions of people. Industries such as the cruise ship mafia have been causing tremendous damage to our planet and should therefore be stopped. The essay have been trying to write can be composed by an AI so why would you compete with a computer?

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