Nowadays, when men and women do not play the equal roles in society, there are various reasons to divide boys and girls into separate schools. Separated schools are the better way to give them the appropriate way to teach children of different genders. There are many activities in schools that are difficult for girls to participate or vice versa.
Mostly, boys prefer scientific skills of literary skills in contrast girls prefer literary skills of scientific skills. Probably, these causes are giving rise to the low-level grades for students. For example, in mathematics outperform boys over girls and this makes the teacher prefers boys over girls, which causes frustrated girls to improve their level in this skill.
Other cause is that the separation gives more freedom for girls to talk without shame or hesitation and to help them to pursue their studies to get high degrees. Also they advance in math and science. On the other hand it led to the lower social issues because of the escalation of their sense of self-esteem than girls in mixed schools. In fact, girls rush into participate in classroom discussions in the absence of boys. Also boys tend to focus and to participate without the presence of girls around them.
By learning at the separate schools, male and female students will have chance to give each gender the most suitable teaching methods because Boys and girls have different learning styles. Also, separated schools help each gender to know the appropriate areas for his nature
Hi Keto
I just skimmed your essay.
I have made some suggestions.
Frankly speaking, this is a very weak essay Keto.
Just 250 words…If you want to take TOEFL test, you are expected to write at least 300 words.
Inappropriate introduction and conclusion paragraphs
and grammatical structure !?
Don’t worry ! keep learning and writing!
Let me know if you have any suggestions.
Good luck.
There is nothing to be worried about. If you want, you’ll be a good writer.
I’m a learner too. I will take IELTS test in February and my dream is score of 9 out of 9 in writing section.
please read it: typos
Read other members’ essays that you think they are good at writing in addition to reading some relevant and reliable texts.
I have probably read over five hundred essays thus far.
Best of luck
Hi, Keto, Happy and Richard,
As far as I know, it’s suggested to write more than 270 words in this writing section of ILTES, if you want a remarkable score.
As to me, I would strongly recommend you, Keto, to read some samples and to focus more on wording and grammatical matching. Samples and dictionaries helped me a lot when I just started to learn writing. They surely will be helpful to you.
Since moderators and friends here are helping us voluntarily. And they have their own lives and jobs. I think we should try to revise our essays at least once before we post them here in this forum.
Anyway, Keto, I think you have got your own opinions about the sexual separation issue. That’s OK, though I think your opinions and relevant reasons are unconvincing.
However, to be honest, you need to practice more on how to express your ideas in English. Some phrases and sentences really confuse me: ‘prefer scientific skills of literary skills’, ‘pursue their studies’, ‘prefers boys over girls’.
Hope you will do better soon after.
Sincerely, Andy
Nowadays mixing between genders becomes as a subject of disagreement views. In my opinion, I am against all kinds of Co-education for young people because they cannot control their feelings and emotions. Therefore I agree with separated schools for scientific and social reasons.
In the scientific side, Composition of the brain for female is a quite different from male. According to Leonard sax, who is a director general of the separate public education, “ The science has discovered that there are certain centers in the brain grow and develop in different speeds with boys and girls. That means the centers of the language and the mote movements such as, the writing grows by six years among females than males. Also, the centers of the mathematics and engineering are grow by four years for males than females."
In the social side, the separated schools helped to reduce absenteeism from school and discipline problems of non-behavioral. According to report from Australian Council for Educational Research, it pursuant conducted a research in 2001 on a six-year. They have been comparing the performance of more than 270,000 students in co-educational schools and separate education, and found that students of separate education excelled academically and behaviorally to students of coeducation.
In summary, we can reach from these sides are that co-education is pushing students to focus on the main goal. That is to obtain a university degree. Also, the students will be more interested to show excellence on the same gender instead of attention of the other gender.
