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Could you please correct grammatical mistakes in the following text? I would greatly appreciate if you could also help me to improve what I say below.
I believe notion of beauty varies from person to person. What to someone looks, seems beautiful might look completely the other way round to someone else. The beauty is a part subjective and part objective; this again is individual-specific. The important of both is objective beauty - a beauty of you which is judged by someone else, and it greatly overwhelms subjective part. As they say beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. A Juliet may find herself chubby, pallid, squint-eyed. It’s her lover, Romeo, which gives meaning to her beauty. There is a strong relation between true love and beauty. Your obsession with youth and beauty won’t take you anywhere unless you have found someone who defines and appreciates your beauty.
I believe the notion of beauty varies from person to person. What one person finds beautiful might appear unattractive to someone else. One’s own beauty is in part subjective and in part objective; this again is individual-specific. The important element is objective beauty - a beauty which is judged by someone else. This greatly overwhelms the subjective element. As they say, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. A Juliet may find herself chubby, pallid and squint-eyed. It’s her lover, Romeo, who gives meaning to her beauty. There is a strong relationship between true love and beauty. Your obsession with youth and beauty won’t take you anywhere unless you have found someone who defines and appreciates your beauty.