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The issue of whether we should allow building nuclear stations has been

debated widely in our community.Although,defenders of nuclear stations believe that

nuclear power is economic and environmentally friendly,these stations shouldn’t be

build for three main reasons.To begin with,the waste that is produced when using nuclear

fuel is very harmful and radioactive.Even small amount of this waste can effect

ecological life negatively.Therefore this waste shouldn’t be handled by anyone without

professional training.Another reason is risk of terrorist attack and sabotage.Terrorists

choose especially nuclear power stations to attack becuse of this nuclear stations must

be protected very carefully.The last reason is limited uranium supplies.World uranium

supplies may run out in about 50 years.When these uranium supplies finished we cannot

produce energy with nuclear stations so that we should consider other options to produce

energy .Despite these strong argument against the issue ,those who favor the issue claim

that nuclear energy is economic For example,20 tonnes of nuclear fuel is sufficient to

provide 3 weeks’ electricity for a city with a population of 1.000.000 while 85.000 tonnes

of oil is necessary to generate the same amount of electricity.The proponents of the issue

have point but people life cannot compared with economical reasons it is certain that

people are more important than money .To conclude, it is crucial that nuclear power

stations shouldn’t be build due to limited supply and ecological reasons

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The issue of whether we should allow THE building OF nuclear POWER stations has been

debated widely in our community.Although,defenders of nuclear POWER stations believe that

nuclear power is economic and environmentally friendly,these stations shouldn’t be

builT for three main reasons.

To begin with,the waste that is produced when using nuclear

fuel is very harmful and radioactive.Even small amountS of this waste can effect

ecological life negatively.Therefore this waste shouldn’t be handled by anyone without

professional training.

Another reason is risk of terrorist attack and sabotage.Terrorists

choose especially nuclear power stations to attack(.) BecAuse of this, nuclear stations must

be protected very carefully.

The last reason CONCERNS limited uranium supplies.World uranium

supplies may run out in about 50 years.When these uranium supplies ARE DEPLETED finished we cannot

produce energy with nuclear stations(,) so that we should consider other options to produce

energy .Despite these strong argument against the issue ,those who favor the issue claim

that nuclear energy is economic For example,20 tonnes of nuclear fuel is sufficient to

provide 3 weeks’ electricity for a city with a population of 1.000.000(,) while 85.000 tonnes

of oil is necessary to generate the same amount of electricity.The proponents of the issue

have A VALID point(,) but peopleS’ LIVES cannot BE compared with PUT AT RISK SIMPLY TO SATISFY economical reasons(.) It is certain that

people are more important than money .

To conclude, it is crucial that nuclear power

stations should NOT be builT due to THE limited supply OF URANIUM and FOR ecological reasons
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WELCOME to our Forum Licqtearget. Your essay is very good. You covered the topic well, with a good example being given, but you must do something about your punctuation. It is your weak point. Please do not post your work with line spacings like these. They are very distracting.

Kitos. 8.5/10

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thanks a lot sir