Are these sentences correct?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Hi once again !

Please help me in correcting these sentences if they are wrong.

  1. He has always motivated me to indulge with great enthusiasm in every field that I have worked on.

  2. They gave me more insights into the subject.

  3. I had gone to England for my friend’s wedding. It was when I got a chance to go to Wembley stadium.

4)Towards the end of my final year at this college, I got a job offer.

  1. I feel that there is great room for improvement in this field.

  2. I hope that I am qualified to pursue a graduate degree in Electrical Engineering, with robotics as my specialization, at your university. I intend to follow up with a career in research later.

I have a question. Can we have a team within a group? or is it the other way round? I mean let’s say I am in (“the” required here?) Marketing team of Mobile Communication group. Is it okay to say, “I am in Marketing team of Mobile Communications group”.

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  1. ‘indulge’ is the wrong vocabulary choice.
    He has always motivated me to participate with great enthusiasm in every field that I have worked on.

  2. They gave me more insights into the subject. <-- possible. Without context it’s not possible to see whether it’s used correctly.

  3. I went to England for my friend’s wedding. It was when I got a chance to go to Wembley stadium.

4)Towards the end of my final year at this college, I got a job offer. <-- possible. Without context it’s not possible to see whether it’s used correctly.

  1. I feel that there is great room for improvement in this field. <-- possible. Without context it’s not possible to see whether it’s used correctly.

  2. I hope that I am qualified to pursue a graduate degree in Electrical Engineering, with robotics as my specialization, at your university. I intend to follow up with a career in research later. <-- possible. Without context it’s not possible to see whether it’s used correctly.

I have a question. Can we have a team within a group? or is it the other way round? I mean let’s say I am in (“the” required here?) Marketing team of Mobile Communication group. Is it okay to say, “I am in Marketing team of Mobile Communications group”.
I am in the Marketing team of the Mobile Communications group.
or
I am in the Marketing group of the Mobile Communications team. (Here, possibly ‘branch’ would be better than ‘group’.)

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Also,

   b) You have helped me a lot [i]in preparing[/i] some good documents.


   I simply use 
            
   (a) Please help me (to) correct theses sentences ...                
   (b) You have helped me (to) prepare some ...

   Beeesneees, what's the difference in the structures below:
    
      ● help + (to) do
      ● help + in doing

         Thanks.
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Please help me in correcting these sentences - please will you correct these sentences which will help me OR Please help me so that I can correct these sentences.
Please help me to correct these sentences- I wish to correct these sentences with your help.

You have helped me in preparing these documents - you prepared the documents, and that has helped me OR You have helped me so that I could prepare these documents.
You have helped me to prepare these documents - I prepared the documents, but with your help.

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Hello, Dear Teacher!

I have come to a conclusion from your view that the “help + in + doing” structure is sometimes ambiguous and it should be avoided, shouldn’t it? :slight_smile:

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The conterxt would make it clear, so there would be no need to avoid it.