Are there too many at's?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Seven new clusters have emerged. These are located at Acacia Lodge at Bukit Batok Street 23, Tuas View Dormitory at Tuas South Avenue 1, Woodlands Industrial Park E1, 85 Kallang Dormitory at Kallang Avenue, Black Tap at Bayfront Avenue, a Kenyon/UBS construction site at Penang Road and McDonald’s.

Are there too many"at’s"?

Thanks.

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Hi @Kohyoongliat,

Yes there are. I would rewrite your text as follows:

Seven new clusters have emerged. These are located at Acacia Lodge in Bukit Batok Street 23, Tuas View Dormitory on Tuas South Avenue 1, Woodlands Industrial Park E1, 85 Kallang Dormitory on Kallang Avenue, Black Tap on Bayfront Avenue, a Kenyon/UBS construction site at Penang Road and McDonald’s.

  • on Washington Avenue
  • in/on/at Oxford Road.

I hope I’ve been of some help.

P.S.: Will you do me the favour I asked you for? Poor Listening Skills

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