Are the below sentences correct? Please advise.

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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  1. Children can be in the play room for as long as they want just as long as the play room has not reached it’s capacity limit/is still within capacity limit. ( should I say reached it’s capacity or still within capacity limit?).
  2. There is no time limit on how long children can stay in the play room if nobody sign up on the list or just as long as the play room is still within/has not reached it’s capacity limit. If more people sign up for the play room and the number of people waiting is greater than the capacity limit then you need make way for them.
  3. How many month am I late on my bill?
  4. I was late in making bill payment by 2 months.
  5. I was late by 2 months in bill payment.
  6. The cat is sick so I brought it home in order to give the cat time to rest and to recover from sickness.
  7. I brought the cat home to allow the cat to get adequate rest for speedy recovery from
    Illness.
  8. I brought the cat home to allow the cat to get proper rest to recover from illness.

Are the above sentences correct? Please advise.

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They are overlong. Please try making them more concise.

I provided examples, but once more the system logged me out when I clicked ‘send message’ and I lost my work.

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This question is acceptable. But you were told, perhaps more than once, that the following question

is not correct and that it should be: Are the sentences below correct?
Unfortunately, you do not seem to have taken note of this advice. Please follow it. (You may be logically correct to say it so, but not grammatically. You could alternatively say: Are the below-mentioned sentences correct? I’m not nitpicking or being pedantic anyway)

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When people have to point out things like that, it generally means that’s exactly what they are doing.

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I apologize for not paying enough attention, forgive me teacher.

I have corrected the above mentioned sentences as follow :

  1. Children can be in the play room for as long as they want just as long as the play room has not reached it’s capacity limit/is still within it’s capacity limit. ( should I say reached it’s capacity or still within capacity limit?).
  2. There is no time limit on how long children can stay in the play room if nobody sign up on the list or just as long as the play room is still within/has not reached it’s capacity limit. If more people sign up for the play room and the number of people waiting is greater than it’s capacity limit then the need make way for them.
  3. How many month am I late on my bill payment?
  4. I was late in making bill payment by 2 months.
  5. I was late by 2 months in bill payment.
  6. The cat is sick so I brought it home in order to give the cat time to rest and to recover from sickness.
  7. I brought the cat home to allow the cat to get adequate rest for speedy recovery from
    Illness.
  8. I brought the cat home to allow the cat to get proper rest to recover from illness.l payment by 2 months.

I hope the above mentioned sentences are correct now, I made some minor changes without changing the intended meaning.

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You still needed to be more concise.

  1. Children can remain in the play room for as long as they want providing there is no waiting list for its use.
  2. There is no time limit on how long children can stay in the play room if it has not reached capacity. If more people sign up for the room then those using it may need to leave to make way for those waiting.
  3. How many months late am I with my bill payment?
  4. I was late in paying my bill by two months.
  5. I was two months late with my bill payment.
  6. The cat was sick so I brought it home to give it time to rest and recover.
  7. I brought the cat home to allow it to recover from illness.
  8. I brought the cat home to allow it to recover from illness.