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English as a Second Language Preparation for and help with the TOEFL® Test and
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“Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

Leaning is processes which start from are birth till we die.
We learn from watching other in are surrounding, with experience, in school, from teachers, friends etc. we learn many things from book i e by reading. it is said“Books are our best friend” . I think only by reading from book we don’t get throughout knowledge but we get it from many thing which comes in day to day life. And By actually experiencing it. Why I think so I will explain it further.
Firstly, in my opinion, reading books is not enough because in every field there is theory papers and particles. Theory only contains knowledge which is quit imaginative. To know the application of read knowledge we need to go apply it practically.
Secondly, the small example of riding a bicycle. When any one teaches you. How to ride a bicycle by give tips orally. It is not enough but when we really want to ride it, we need to start cycling.
Finally, example of medical student they have all theory papers to read but they are not actually a doctor till they know how to treat the patient. For that they need to go internship then after, they are certified as a physician.
All in all, only reading is not enough for through knowledge but its application is very important. Knowledge gained by book and by experience goes hand in hand.
. I think only by reading from book we don’t get throughout knowledge but we get it from many thing which comes in day to day life. And By actually experiencing it. Why I think so I will explain it further.
Firstly, in my opinion, reading books is not enough because in every field there is theory paper and particles. Theory only contains knowledge which is quit imaginative. To know the application read knowledge we need to go apply it practically.
Secondly, the small example of riding a bicycle. When any one teaches you. How to ride a bicycle by give tips orally. It is not enough but when we really want to ride it, we need to start cycling.
Finally, example of medical student they have all theory papers to read but they are not actually a doctor till they know how to treat the patient. For that they need to go internship then after, they are certified as a physician.
All in all, only reading is not enough for perfect knowledge but its application is very important. Knowledge gained by book and by experience goes hand in hand.

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I would offer the same advice to you as I have just given Krrish. Essay is not short of ideas, but so badly written. Please write it again.

5/10. Kitos. Please delete the copy of this essay which you have posted.

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ok I will write it again. Thank. I got only 5. I am working hard but still not improving.
Thanking you,
Megha

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Good morning Meghagan. Every word you write IS an improvement. You need to appreciate that you are on a learning curve. You are on a level course at the moment.
You will make many mistakes, and each mistake is a new time of learning.
The very fact that have shown your disappointment pleases me, because it demonstrates your serious intention to overcome your errors .
Keep reading and writing. It is important that you read in a studious way. See the words being used to form the sentence, and try to realise the significance of the words, don’t just read … study the form.
I congratulate you on your attitude toward learning.

Kitos.

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I like it: Every word you write IS an improvement.
Thank you Bill. :slight_smile:

Mixmixi

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Leaning is processes which start from are birth till death.
We learn from watching others, in are surrounding. As we learn many things from book so it is said that, “Books are our best friend”. In my opinion only by reading from book we don’t get throughout knowledge but we get it from many things which we come across in day to day life and by actually experiencing it.

Firstly, reading books is not enough. The proof is, in every field which ever we look into, it includes theory as well as particle knowledge. As theory contains quit imaginative information. So its application is neccesarry to know it completely.
Secondly, the small example of riding a bicycle. When any one teaches you, How to ride a bicycle mearly by saying. It is not enough, but actual cycling will give an real feeling of learning bicycle.
Finally, the example of medical student. Who study therotical part for four year, still he/she need to go for internship which will provide them a certification of Docter.
All in all, only reading is not enough to gain over all knowledge but its application is very important. Knowledge gained by book and by experience goes hand in hand.