As technology advances, artificial intelligence and robotics will definitely be extremely helpful in the future. People can enjoy the assistance of a robot with only a few clicks or verbal orders. The utilization of AI and robotic is universal they can be applied to our daily house keeping, education, public transportation, and office works, which brings us enormous convenience and benefit. For one thing, it will prominently enhance our efficiency, leaving people more vacant time to fulfill other important tasks. For another, due to its multiple usages, it will be able to solve many social problems such as helping the care of the elderly with caring robots and stabilizing social orders with digital traffic signs.
However, AI and robotics surely remain some secret concerns. First and foremost, some people believe that the involvement of robots will result in ethnical problems, since there’s no certain answer to our attitude toward the machinery. What if the robots turn out to have their own temper or consciousness? Besides, other people worry about human power will be replaced by the improving AI. As the result, the rate of unemployment will be soaring high, and eventually causing the disappearance of many potential jobs. Last but not least, many people’s interaction, and eliminate our social ability, which will only left us a cold world without sincere mingles. Briefly saying, people’s lives will be impeccably easier with the swift development of AI and robotics; nevertheless, we should take a thorough ponder on the influence they may bring. After all, it’s the proper use that benefit us and leaves no hurts.
As technology advances, artificial intelligence and robotics will definitely (I think ‘will’ alone will suffice) be extremely helpful in the future. People can enjoy the assistance of a robot with only a few clicks or verbal orders. The utilization of AI and robotic is universal in that they can be applied to our daily house keeping, education, public transportation, and office work, which brings us enormous convenience and benefits. For one thing, it will prominently enhance our efficiency, leaving us more spare time to fulfill other important tasks. For another, due to its multiple utilities, we will be able to solve many social problems such as facilitating the care of the elderly and the digital traffic signs.
However, AI and robotics surely pose some concerns. First and foremost, some people believe that the involvement of robots will result in ethnical (I don’t understand what it has to do with ethnicity) problems, since there’s no certain answer to our attitude toward the machinery. What if the robots turn out to have their own temper or consciousness? Besides, other people worry about human power being replaced by AI. As a result, the rate of unemployment will be soaring high eventually causing the disappearance of many potential job opportunities. Last but not least, it adversely affects human interactions and eliminates our social ability to progress through interpersonal relationships.
Nevertheless people’s lives will be easier and more comfortable with the swift development of AI and robotics. But it is the proper use of the technology that offers us benefits and leaves us unhurt.
(Though the flow of your thoughts in the second paragraph has become suddenly different, the essay is good!)