I’m Abanoub. I really want a native speaker to listen to my message and give me a feedback. I’ve been trying to improve my language for a long time, but I didn’t have the chance to practice English with a native speaker. So, I recorded a short paragraph from Ernest Hemingway’s “A VERY SHORT STORY.”
Waiting for your evaluation and advice.
One hot evening in Padua they carried him up onto the roof and he could look out over the top of the town. There were chimney swifts in the sky. After a while it got dark and the searchlights came out. The others went down and took the bottles with them. He and Luz could hear them below on the balcony. Luz sat on the bed. She was cool and fresh in the hot night.