A university education is necessary for success in today’s world.


#1

Good afternoon and thanks for last corrections! Writing is gradually becoming a pleasure for me. Here is another essay.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A university education is necessary for success in today’s world. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

Knowledge is becoming the most important thing in today’s world. Good specialists are needed everywhere. University education provides us with useful skills and living experience for having a good job in the future. Having a higher education is essential part of life for someone who wants to be successful. I have three reasons to support this point.

Firstly, a person who wants to have a good career must be not just well experienced but also intelligent. University is something like the centre of information, where a student spend many time studying important things about his subject and themes, connected with it. Despite of popularity of the Internet, some sparse specific materials are available only at the University libraries. Moreover, University is the place where a student can meet a huge amount of competent people among the teaching staff and other students.

Secondly, I am sure that relationships are the essential condition in making a good career. Studying at the university, we find many new friends connected with our future profession. It is possible that some of them will be directors of big corporations or take management positions in government. From this point of view, today’s friends from the university may become future partners or the people who can help in solving some problems.

Finally, the University provides us with very important skill in studying new subjects. For example, in my technical university some teachers prefer to just give us the reading materials and to explain the hardest parts of it instead of force us to write the full course of lectures. And in the exam we should show them that we have understood this course perfectly. It is good experience in the self-studying. As a result, when I wanted to get a job related to economics, it took me just a week to know about this subject more than enough to pass quite a hard interview.

In conclusion, the essential part in making a good career is studying at the University. It gives us wide knowledge, valuable friends and academic skills for future development. Therefore, I suppose that everyone who wants to succeed should have a good education first of all.

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#2

Good afternoon and thanks for last corrections! Writing is gradually becoming a pleasure for me. Here is another essay.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A university education is necessary for success in today’s world. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

Knowledge is becoming the most important thing in today’s world. Good specialists are needed everywhere. University education provides us with useful skills and living experience for having a good job in the future. Having a higher education is AN essential part of life for someone who wants to be successful. I have three reasons to support this point.

Firstly, a person who wants to have a good career must be not ONLY well experienced but also intelligent. University is something like the centre of information, where a student spendS A GREAT DEAL OF time studying important things about his subject and THE themes, connected with it. Despite THE popularity of the Internet, some sparse specific materials are available only at the university libraries. Moreover, university is the place where a student can meet a huge amount of competent people among the teaching staff and other students.

Secondly, I am sure that relationships are the essential condition in making a good career. Studying at the university, we find many new friends connected with our future profession. It is possible that some of them will be directors of big corporations or take management positions in government. From this point of view, today’s friends from the university may become future partners or the people who can help in solving some OF YOUR problems.

Finally, the university provides us with very important skill in studying new subjects. For example, in my technical university some teachers prefer to just give us the reading materials and to explain the hardest parts of it(,) instead of forcING us to write the full course of lectures. And in the exam we should show them that we have understood this course perfectly. It is good experience in the self-studying. As a result, when I wanted to get a job related to economics, it took me just a week to know about this subject; more than enough to pass quite a hard interview.

In conclusion, the essential part in making a good career is studying at the University. It gives us wide knowledge, valuable friends and academic skills for future development. Therefore, I suppose that everyone who wants to succeed should have a good education first of all.
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Really good Arseni.

Kitos. 9/10


#3

thanks for such a high grade and for “spend a great deal”. But there are still some problems with my grammar and I do appreciate you have showed it to me.


#4

That will correct itself over time providing you continue to read and study. Overall your essay was very good.

Kitos.