A TOEFL Independent Writing Requesting Feedback

[Torsten]

Maybe you can pick up some ideas from the following thread.

Would you like to spend one day, thinking in English?

Hi, this question crossed my mind suddenly when I travelled on the underground as I like translating ads, headings, rules, etc. during my underground journey. Would you like to spend one day, thinking in English (or translating your thoughts into English immediately)? Do you think it would be easy or difficult for you? For me, it would have been a day that took a lot of concentration.