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A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught.
With a concerning of education is more visible in nowadays. Due to this, there are an increasing number of people who are debated over whether have the ability of teacher is to relate well with student more important rather than have a excellent knowledge of the subject being taught or not. The answers vary from one person to another. From my point of view. I absolute agree with the statement, even though some people hold the opposite opinion. My reasons and example listed below will strengthen my point.
The first reason that I am trying to convey is that children to grow up into a surrounding that it is very necessary for children to learn how to get along to other people and need build a peaceful relationship for their environment, even they must realize the significance of respecting parents, teachers, classmate, etc. This is a skill that they will take them throughout their lives, and it should be fostered at an early age. In these cases, this is undoubtedly what teacher plays a crucial role on children’s process of their life.
Among other reasons that I think cannot be ignored is the one that having been exposed to the type of teacher’s image, such as the quality of kindness, patience and sense of responsibility which I think this affection of teachers will ultimately be beneficial for the children. There are good qualities will help them in all of their later endeavors in life. Not only did children achieve the attitude to others, but children also gained the wonderful interpersonal skills. Engraining this personality into children when they are young is the best way to ensure their success in the future.
From what has been discussed above, however, we can get the common view that all of these are extremely crucial elements that will guarantee children’s childhood that enrich various happy and will store a great number of nice memory in their life while their teachers always relate well with them. This is to say, the character of person is more important than how much knowledge he have.
TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a social science class