My town is located in the Northern of Thailand is named “Lampang” where is a small town. If someone is planning to move to my town, he will adapt himself to the local circumstances in many ways. Something he will like such as the standard of living and local people’s behavior. However, there are dislike things including the weather and a few of facilities.
Lampang is a small town in the Northern of Thailand and there is a few of the population. The daily expense is inexpensive because the standard of live is quite low. People’s life is very simple. They do not need to rush go to the office in the morning because there is no traffic jam and the office is very close from their home. Furthermore, the local people‘s behavior is very impressive. Their characteristics are kind, considerate and friendly. They are willing to support when you face with any problems. Most of people in the town are know each other because they usually have activities together. For instance, in the morning, people are often drink coffee together in a coffeehouse forum. Nevertheless, if you would like to move in my town, there is something that you will dislike including the weather and a few of facilities. Normally, the weather is hot all year, especially in the summer. Sometimes the temperature reached to forty degree Celsius while in the weather, the weather is quite cool. The temperature is around five to ten degree Celsius. Thus, you should prepare yourselves for the changing circumstances. There is no public transportation such as sky trains, subways, taxi and buses. There are
tricycles and a motorcycle. Therefore, it is not convenient if you have not your own car. Moreover, there are only two department stores and a few of nigh clubs, but there are lots of market night bazaars.
To conclusion, these are the things that you may like and dislike when you would like to move in my town. It is depend on how you can adjust yourself to the unacquainted places to live in the happy life.
TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from an American History class
My town is located in the Northern of Thailand is named “Lampang”(.) IT IS is a small town. If someone is planning to move to my town, he will HAVE TO adapt himself to the local circumstances in many ways. Something he will(,) like such as the standard of living(,) and local people’s behavior. However, there are THINGS TO dislike including the weather and a few of THE facilities.
Lampang is a small town in the Northern of Thailand andIT HAS ONLY A SMALL population. The daily expenseS ARE inexpensive because the standard of liFe is quite low. People’s LIVES ARE very simple. They do not need to rush TO go to the office in the morning(,) because there ARE no traffic jamS and the office is very close TO their home. Furthermore, the local people‘s behavior is very impressive. Their characteristics are kind, considerate and friendly. They are willing to support YOU when you ARE faceD with any problems. Most of people in the town are knowN TO each other because they usually SHARE activities together. For instance, in the morning, people are often drinkING coffee together in a coffee-house forum. Nevertheless, if you would like to move TO my town there is something that you will dislike APART FROM the weather and a few of THE facilities.
Normally, the weather is hot all year ROUND, especially in the summer. Sometimes the temperature REACHES forty degree Celsius(,) while in the WINTER, the weather is quite cool. The temperature is around five to ten degree Celsius. Thus, you should prepare yourselves for the changing circumstances. There is no public transportation such as sky trains, subways, taxiS and buses. There are tricycles and a motorcycle. Therefore, it is not convenient if you DO NOT have your own car. Moreover, there are only two department stores and a few nighT clubs, but there are lots of night market bazaars.
IN conclusion, these are the things that you may like and dislike when you would like to move in my town. It is dependANT on how you can adjust yourself to theSE unacquainted CONDITIONS AS TO WHETHER YOU CAN live A happy life HERE OR NOT.
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OK Groffy. You have the makings of a very good essay here. I would like you to study the corrections, and try to understand the difference in what is now written, and what you tried to write. You are getting better. You only have to see, and realise, the small errors that you are making.
Kitos. 8/10